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                        <header id="nameplate">
                                <h1>Philo</h1>
                                <a class="installButton" href="#install">Install</a>
+                               <a class="docsButton" href="http://docs.philocms.org/">Docs</a>
                        </header><!-- /#nameplate -->
                        
                        <article id="content">
                                
                                <section id="whatIs">
-                                       <p><span class="s1"><span class="w1">Philo</span> is a powerful content-management system built with <a href="https://djangoproject.com/">Django</a>.</span> It manages websites, simple and complex.</p>
+                                       <p><span class="s1"><span class="w1">Philo</span> is a powerful content-management system built with <a href="https://djangoproject.com/">Django</a>.</span> It manages web sites, simple and complex.</p>
                                </section>
                                
                                <div class="tucol" id="intro">
-                                       <section id="history">
-                                               <p><span class="pname">Philo</span> was developed by a team of developers working for Oberlin College to meet their needs for flexible, manageable website development and maintenance. To learn more about Philo&#8217;s features and functionality <a href="http://docs.philocms.org/">read the documentation</a>.</p>
+                                       <section>
+                                               <p><span class="pname">Philo</span> is designed by and for web developers. <strong>Web developers who don't like compromise.</strong></p>
+                                               <p>Initially developed for Oberlin College, <span class="pname">Philo</span> meets changing and complex needs gracefully. To learn more, <a href="http://docs.philocms.org/">read the documentation</a>.</p>
                                        </section>
                                
                                        <section id="onPhilo">
                                                <header>
-                                                       <h2>Philo-Powered Websites</h2>
+                                                       <h2>Philo-Powered web sites</h2>
                                                </header>
                                                <ul>
-                                                       <li><a href="http://oncampus.oberlin.edu/">Oberlin Oncampus</a></li>
+                                                       <li><a href="http://oncampus.oberlin.edu/">Oberlin OnCampus</a></li>
                                                        <li><a href="http://shansi.oberlin.edu/">Oberlin Shansi</a></li>
                                                </ul>
                                        </section>
                                </div>
                                
                                <section id="exampleSection">
-                                       <!-- h2 id="a_simple_example">A Simple Example</h2 -->
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                                        <div class="three-up">
                                                <figure>
                                                        <img src="static/img/container1.png" width="600" height="300" />
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                                                        <figcaption>See the results on your site!</figcaption>
                                                </figure>
                                        </div>
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-                                       <p>You can use collections, redirects, files, content references (included in the <span class="pname">Philo</span> core), as well as the <span class="pname">Philo</span> contrib apps and your own code to create and manage more powerful, complex websites. Learn more in <a href="http://docs.philocms.org/">the documentation</a>.</p>
+                                       <p><span class="pname">Philo</span> provides core web features&#8212;such as page editing, seen above&#8212;and a foundation for building complex web sites and applications.</p>
                                </section>
                                
                                <section id="contribSection">
                                        <h2 id="batteries_included">Batteries Included</h2>
                        
-                                       <p>Following Python and Django&#8217;s <a href="http://docs.python.org/tutorial/stdlib.html#batteries-included">&ldquo;batteries included&rdquo; philosophy</a>, Philo includes a number of optional packages that simplify common website structures. These are stored in <code>philo.contrib</code> and include the following:</p>
+                                       <p>Following Python and Django&#8217;s <a href="http://docs.python.org/tutorial/stdlib.html#batteries-included">&ldquo;batteries included&rdquo; philosophy</a>, <span class="pname">Philo</span> includes a number of optional modules that simplify common web site structures. These are located in <code>philo.contrib</code> and include the following:</p>
                        
                                        <ul id="contribList">
                                                <li>
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                                        <section class="getInvolved">
                                                <h2 id="get_involved">Get Involved</h2>
-                                               <p><span class="pname">Philo</span> is still under heavy development. If you&#8217;re a Python/Django developer, help out by forking <a href="http://github.com/ithinksw/philo"><span class="pname">Philo</span> on GitHub</a> to add features or fix bugs.</p>
+                                               <p><span class="pname">Philo</span> is still under heavy development. If you&#8217;re a Python/Django developer, help out by forking <span class="pname">Philo</span> on <a href="http://github.com/ithinksw/philo">GitHub</a> or <a href="http://gitorious.org/ithinksw/philo">Gitorious</a> to add features or fix bugs.</p>
                                        </section>
                                </div>